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6 lines on 2 miles…
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...Look what Edvard started with counting the lines of poems...





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I’ve been trying to bike that distance,

 

Firstly it was but one mile, now two,

 

Twice around the park before dinners stew,

 

A ride to get me out into Nature,

 

And to keep me from feeling otherwise blue…

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 Reviews of "6 lines on 2 miles…"
Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on July 1, 2010
Are you cheating on the distances as well as the line counts?

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on July 1, 2010
Yeah, as Georg says, the Tour de France starts on Sunday. You can do it!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 1, 2010
excellent! love the write and good for you for getting out there!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 1, 2010
Li'l brother Jersey Ed, there's an opening on Tour de France if you are game, remember Lance Armstrong? he won that seven times never trying, so for ya it should be a piece of cake!

EDvard(k) Ole Brother


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 1, 2010
Look what Edvard started with counting the lines of poems...

Wait a Minute - Did old Brother Edvard teach you how to count using the Swedish Method?!

If 6 lines is really 5, does that mean 2 miles is really only 1?!

And that would mean you better ride four times around the park before dinner, instead of two!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Well let's see 5 lines in two miles is kind of about maybe the square root of 5 minus a bit..aw fuck it.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Love your title, Ed! Whenever numerals and alphabets combine, something weirdiful follows! There were only five lines, unless you added e, divided by two...

Otherwise, just this summer, I'm doing water aerobics!, when I get there, but, I've found it fun and exhilarating and fluid and kindly in hiding flaws of flabbier bodies. Most of us are older, some are not.

Erin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
As you probably already know, I am a cycling fanatic so I can relate to this to some extent, Ed. Good for you! Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
well done!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
OOPs, it is 5 lines, Jackie thanks for pointing it out, though I could use the "e" as the sixth...? LOL, Ed

Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Ed, you are going to be so healthy! What very good habits you are acquiring, my friend. And I read optimism in your words. But...errr...is this 5 lines, not 6? Typo, m'dear.
Blessings and Love - Micke

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Bro Edvard is a natural leader,you follow well lil brother;-)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
Have to start somewhere, I think I could do this too if I had a motor on the bike...
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