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Dislocated id...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
  
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Not exactly poetry, not exactly story, just fleeting thoughts, micellaneous ramblings, musings,while high, to the self...

                           "DISLOCATED ID..."


Expiring days of nonentities, enraptured by fleeting glances...


Things of value quicksanded into a void of endless talents, though not branching out into ill-defined terminals.


While leaves of tenderness expose their veins to blaspheming sunlight, arch rivals continue their constant rhetoric until there is no more sensitivity available to lambaste...then silence


The cause of freedom is buried 'neath megatons of hurled-in filth and absolute senselessness.


Whereupon happens a ghoulish demeanor to upend the daily rituals causing brutish violence against those with true valor.


A thousand daydreams coast to conclusions and their night partners are lost mid daily chores of insignificance, to awaken again without cause of effect; alas, lost also to mankind's advantage.


To bring a halt to deprivation is strengthened by an influx of meteoric matter, once pausing to debilitate the weak humanoid mind further.


Shadows and myriad haunts are caught fleeting into caves of wilderness-bound thoughts--where does it end?


Wall upon wall of balanced concrete, topped by spears of iron, cannot hold back an avalanche of indecent laws and tendencies...


 


WRITTEN WITHOUT CONCENTRATION...
PERHAPS THE UNCONCIOUS IS HELPFUL
BUT HOW WOULD I KNOW? MAYHAPS YOU THE READER CAN TELL ME WHAT THE ABOVE MEANS, AS I AM UNABLE TO DECIPHER IT...


 


 


  


 


 


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 Reviews of "Dislocated id..."
Reviewed by Bobbie Hess (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2003
Your innermost thoughts prevail . . . Good job, Ed. Where do you get the words?!
Bobbie

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on August 22, 2003
It sounds like the high was a bit on the dark side, Ed. I like it! ;)

I especially relate to this verse...

A thousand daydreams coast to conclusions and their night partners are lost mid daily chores of insignificance, to awaken again without cause of effect; alas, lost also to mankind's advantage.

:)

:)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
My ID runs me...lol! This was great! Pleasure to read.

Thank you,
Emilie

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
Ahhhh to me is called stroking the muse which was running errantly deep and thought provoking! I have truly enjoyed these random thoughts of yours!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 21, 2003
I don't know what they all mean, but I do know that I sure like the last two lines!


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