Forever Yours (poem) by Tiffany Lynn Simar on AuthorsDen

Forever Yours
by Tiffany Lynn Simar → (All Poetry by Tiffany Lynn Simar)
Wednesday, January 31, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Parched from lack of love No one to love me whilst my heart is on fire Walk through the jungle into the cavern below Connected to the emptiness in my soul It is a world of sadness Of darkness Of dust Of shadow Of shame Of lust Blow the cobwebs away to reveal your light Were you here all along? The voice to my lyrics? The noise to my song? Why did you remain hidden for so long? Me standing, longing, lost in this stagnant world If I run to you now will you love me as I am? Free me from this place before all of the walls close in? I cannot be that far gone Come closer now and save me from myself I long to swim in the forever I see in your eyes Sink into the abyss of your love until I find myself drowning in forever Because I do not know how to swim But oh, what a way to go Forever a dreamer Forever yours By, Tiffany Simar 1/31/18

Reviewed by Susanne Leist

Reviewed on February 4, 2018

We create walls around us, our prisons. To find love, we must bring those walls tumbling down.

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on February 2, 2018

Dear Tiffany, this is a beautiful poem for so many who feel lost and alone! I was one of those people after my first wife went to Heaven so young. I was so lonely even though I had two daughters and a dog who was a son-of-a-gun! With prayer and fellowship from others in our Bible study, God was able to turn a life of stale bread into a lovely life of milk and honey! Amen!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 1, 2018

As a young bachelor in my 20s, I often dated women like this. They had great passion and were looking for some kind of prince to come and carry them off and take away their misery. But they were so narrow-minded and stuck in their ways, that they would never make good wives. So I seldom went back for a second date with eccentric souls like this.

Ron