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Just One Thread
by Crystal-Rain Love → (All Poetry by Crystal-Rain Love)
  
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Why? Why is it so hard to fulfill one single promise?
All I asked was for a little time,
not a century of your precious life.
Just a friendly greeting and maybe a gentle kiss or two.
I’d settle for a hand to hold.
At least a look from your eyes,
letting me know that you are conscious of the fact that I’m here.
Anything but this gnawing pain spreading from my body to my head like an intense migraine.
Just pretend if you have to,
grant me the right of foolish hopes,
and fantasies that are never to be.
Just give me one thread from which I can falsely envision a tapestry.


copyright(c)2003 Crystal-Rain Love

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 Reviews of "Just One Thread"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 31, 2003
Rain! Rain! Rain! I live this. This is so heartfelt and real to me. Your words exhale reality and full emotion; the salt of life. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
Poignant and very well done
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on December 4, 2003
Gee Crystal, you want a lot from a man. A little time, a friendly greeting, a kiss or two, a hold of hands and a look from his eyes.
That's five things, we are only good for one or two things lol, just kidding.
This is a fine write, I enjoy the emotional pull your poems possess.

best wishes

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
Beautiful poetry and thoughts.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
May your tapestry be filled with many threads

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
Very sad and well written.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
Absolutely a wonderful write ...Crystal
enjoyed reading much
excellent

William


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