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She Was Done In
by George J. Carroll → (All Poetry by George J. Carroll)
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It was decomposed,

With an acrid smell.

Death lingers in the air,

The village church sounds its knell.

 

In life there was but beauty,

And laughter all the time.

She knew the smell of roses,

For she was just as sublime.

 

Many thought of her as an angel,

For her modesty and goodness.

She shared it with friend or foe,

Her loving arms  waiting to caress.

 

But someone done her in,

And left her to decay.

The town went into mourning,

You can smell roses there to this day.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "She Was Done In"
Reviewed on October 20, 2012
Ahhh but left her mark of care and love
that which all will remember

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 16, 2012
'DONE HER IN'...NOW WHERE DID I HEAR THAT EXPRESSION LAST? AH...I REMEMBER...'MY FAIR LADY'. HOW THE YOUNG FLOWER SELLER SHOCKED THE ARISTOCRATS AT THE RACE WITH THE TERM, 'DONE HER IN' WHEN DESCRIBING HER AUNT'S DEATH! THAT SCENE WAS FUNNY, BUT THIS SCENE IS SOMEWHAT MYSTERIOUS, CHILLY...AND IS NOT FUNNY AT ALL. GOOD WORK, GEORGE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
A very enjoyable write, George.

Deborah

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
what an interesting tribute George
budd

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Nice circle. Roses take the lime light. Dark, yet it reminds me of the old chestnut.... A rose lay in the road, someone stepped on it, and the crushed rose released its fragrance.

Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Well, shucky darn, she sure got a raw deal. Roses...so sweet...so sinister. Great fun write! Be well, Kathy

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
sounds like my garden my roses come and go
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Reads like a murder mystery. Death of an angel is not sweet.

Ron

Reviewed on October 15, 2012
She'll be back!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Happens all the time, George.


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