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through the mist
by ira eden → (All Poetry by ira eden)
  
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i have captured a secret tale
of myths and things explained
questioning this vital life to dive
beyond the vale
a quick change
to tell of chance
formula
in this
vial


enchanted momentum
a sonic validation
spoken to emerge
thus do we exist
through the story
that
we've
told


a drift away to fade
to betray your host
a glance
and kiss
goodbye


maybe yes just maybe
she'll stay awhile
this time


and maybe if you taste
her wine will bliss linger
through the mist


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 Reviews of "through the mist"
Reviewed by J. Pajot
Reviewed on October 10, 2003
There is something here of quality...may you find the magic within those misty places. Bright blessongs to you, Jim.

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2003
This poem is very deep. You evoked much feelings and emotions into this one. Excellent work!

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on October 4, 2003
Yes, the last verse really brings it all home. Mist is one of my favorite things to write about. It lends a poem a haunting quality.

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2003
I love the last verse in particular..

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 4, 2003
Enjoyed reading this!!

Well penned!!

love Tinka

Reviewed on October 4, 2003
Such a lovely poem to read today! Beautiful!

Reindeer


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