Loved the playfulness of these, Bill... but then tripped up on the final one, somehow... like a giggling hiccup!! True, things are only "fun" when within the safety of respected boundaries. That then leaves everyone free to keep their choices their own. Delightful, thank you. Kate xx
Brilliant in tone, lovely in pitch and anding in 'his', which is history, combined with... oh, wait, it is a love song... I thought it was not.
Thank you, William, for this piece of self, beauty and subjectivity.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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Tenderness in each sweet syllable of this senryu--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.