Very moving; I like the juxtaposition between young and old. I am particularly taken with your second stanza: "days dimming in repeated musts" rings with much truth. When perceived "necessities" rule our hours, the days - moment by moment - grow less bright. There seems to be a strong degree of "resignation" within these words, which is why I believe your readers will sense sadness. Yet, there is also a sense of yin/yang here that is a bit comforting.
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
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