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September Freedom Loss
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Each day is a reminder nothing is free, nothing on this eareth lasts forever

From the past deliver me please
From the evil growing in my heart

Shadow fills a newborn sky
Ghost dance in the ash left
Want lives in revenge of slain
Cast of lead forms from pain
When does it ever too old grow

Step me Lord past the hate
burning my insides out to view

Crying echoes in my time
like rain of soot and ash left
no holds barred in anguish born
when do I fill the hollow in my soul
let the cruel world fall to a peace

Mercy seeks a palace of refuge
but all I want is the eye for tooth

Willing hearts glow streams of light
while angels lift souls almost home
the gates of hell beg in eager anger
seeking demon to return to their place
last of chains broken in a hover above

Children pull all my tears out bringing
just a word or two of sanity still hurts

Danger, danger, fire in the sky, no
please it can’t be in my homeland
sick child of hate takes a freedom
tears turn back time and we bleed
mark the spot freedom died a little

Blood makes for a special place
four score and seven, I cry again

Divided once again we face hate
religion takes its toll see the souls
as each bows to pray and silence comes
Hurt grabs all that anger inside the heart
why is a never-ending question

Give me your dream and let it fall not
structure swims in new light on the dawn


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 Reviews of "September Freedom Loss"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Magnificently powerful write Walter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on September 11, 2004
(((walter)))

your words pack a powerful punch in this one. raw, emotive piece that makes the reader sit back and reflect.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( well done!

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Poetic metaphor collides with reality's punch in this very important piece, Walter. "let the cruel world fall to a peace" is utterly shocking in its woven word-play... many have written of this day, of this time... you have created a place to go and think. Impressive in its bare emotion, indeed! katy xox.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Walter, most have found at the least a place of neutral thought, where we can find peace on a personal level. We as humans really want to believe that we can some day in time have the realization of world peace, but whether we ever bring it to an actual reality or not, is remained to be seen.
We must never give up the fight against terrorism, when we do, we will have lost the battle we have refused to fight.
We all pray..and we must continue to do so.

Lisa


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