Lonely as the wind it comes on train that I have ridden before slowly as a silent night it brings a message from inside my heart keeping a world at bay in sad places long gone I am at home will you offer me a needed drink of the water of human kindness I just need a place to sleep maybe a corner there on the floor Old dog licks my face as we share a spot by the pot-belly stove Coffee black strong enough to take the chill out of these bones
Wind howls as the banshee comes to take me to a final resting place in this house a friendly hand remembers me allows me to leave in grace bible and candle there organ playing soft in my mind angels intervene sweet the smell of labor worked turned the life of the land beauty seen debt to pay in the morning light as the sun finds its way to this old soul children gather round as I tell smiling faces the many stories of the road pastor places his hand on my arm it is time to move on and spread the dream
Train is rolling slow hand reaches down and pulls him in an empty car voice is clear as he leaves behind the family of souls and heads for a star gift of life to be shared in the vision laid of an old man going home cast not a rock or a stone for the sin was paid for long ago rest and sleep in the soft stray as the voices of life well talk on in the peace of the rolling train with the hundreds before he is done old dog licks his face as crying children look on grandpa has gone home
wow this is beautiful!!!!
it brings to mind a movie a saw maybe it was twilight zone
old man granpa and a train
you brought the feelings of a joy and a sadness that i got from that picture in my mind, excellent piece
thanks
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on February 28, 2005
A sad write yet so inspiring words here too. I especially liked the lines ...cast not a rock or a stone for the sin was paid for long ago rest and sleep... ...in the peace of the rolling train. Nice words to remember. This whole beautiful poem just sways and flows and says so much Thank You.
Love Tracey xo
This is a heart touching and powerful tribute, Walter. Very nicely written, though the font is so small I had to cut and paste to WORD to make it easier to read.
Take care,
Sherry
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
it brings to mind a movie a saw maybe it was twilight zone
old man granpa and a train
you brought the feelings of a joy and a sadness that i got from that picture in my mind, excellent piece
thanks
Love Tracey xo
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry