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Self Evaluation Most Difficult
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We see all nothing ever hidden, perhaps too much of the bad and not enough of the good.






Author Note: Think, "The Devil and Daniel Webster"








The room was black and cold
a voice from deep inside presented itself
You and I have to talk
I am your soul

Slivers of image danced in ghost like forms on the walls
A quorum of values lent themselves to the fold

Like the story teller you are we are here to learn

Daniel Webster from nowhere appeared
I shall represent you my son you are in trouble

Try as I might from this dream I could not wake

Rivers of thought played and stayed in full view for all

In the foolish of the youth I had lived, the hurt and the pride
Silly worthless lies played before me creating a past being lived

From the pages of my life many came forward hurt and loved by words
I said in anger and in grief, false witness laid heavy on me from all directions

Then one by one a multitude of voices appeared each giving value to my existence

From small gifts given both in words and physical relief each a mire drop of saving water

A hand laid on my shoulder dad I need you please help me I hurt inside my dreams make me cry

I awake from this wired foolish dream to my son holding on to me for dear life, I swear in the back ground I saw


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 Reviews of "Self Evaluation Most Difficult"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Wonderful poetry Walter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Incredible dream!

Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Your summary says it all. Wonderful write!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)


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