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One More Detail
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Look past the day

Shadow on the ground of living
Guns talk
Many cry
Why
A few
Pass
Final
Review
Mom

I
miss
you

Bars of stars fall heavy on her hands
Seldom known better than a letter left

Stratch pretty and tall smartly lays tear
Scent of whiskey fate turned

Mother screams no not true
It should be you

Salute click heals
Turn on dime

Clictly clack of heals
Toes follow breath

Stone and voice talk
Mom I am home

Wish you could have waited for me
Brought another here broken

Taps
mix
with
twenty one
guns
speak

 
 
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 Reviews of "One More Detail"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 14, 2006
A 21 gun salute for mother's Day!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on May 14, 2006
The only thing that I could capture in this poem is your thoughts of your mother. I could not feel anything more than that.

Perhaps this caught me in one of my dumb days, I can't awwm ro catch all its meaning. Sorry!...but this is just me and my humble opinion.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


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