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Tears Mark The Spot
by Walter LaVerne Jones → (All Poetry by Walter LaVerne Jones)
  
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Some people take the easy way out, leaving behind hurt, pain, unresolved questions and life un full filled.

Tears mark the spot
Where you left your heart
It was not so long ago
That I knew your name

Mine and yours they were the same
the hurting never stops
you walked away they buried you today
I don’t know what I did wrong

The kids all lay in bed
Can’t accept that you are dead
I wish I knew what or why
Each room is the same
all call your name

Why did you leave this way
The dark of day clouds get in the way
Of all the feelings I knew
Still I see you here, damn I miss you dear

Life is nothing with out you
Ground is cold and hard
I lay the roses down walk slowly a way
Was life really that bad

No answers in the wind
I will never give in
To all the temptations
You left laying around

Kids and I pray
We made it through another day
I watch for signs in Abby’s eyes

I tell her its ok to cry
She will anyway
Well were moving on

I guess this is so long
All that’s left to do
Is try to live with out you
But why?

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 Reviews of "Tears Mark The Spot"
Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Truly beautiful write. Well Done!
Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Glad it's not about you, Walter, and it's an excellent write.

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Death can be beautiful, ironically, but the emotion brought about, commonly, is ugly and sad and we wish to rid it. I like how this poem delves into the common emotion many of us feel when a death enters our lives (or rather, exits). Touching, peaceful, comforting in knowing others feel the same and a good releasing of emotion...


Blessings, + Brittany
www.brittanyrenee.com

Reviewed by Walter Jones
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Thanks to all you wonderful people, this is not about me. It was a feeling I had about time and people and dealing with the tragic aspects of life.
Walt

Reviewed by lianne Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
oh this is a very sad and emotional poem that brought a tear to my eye- it is an amazing write walter!

Reviewed on November 19, 2003
(((walter)))

*tears* i felt the sadness deep inside my soul as i read this--well written, well conveyed emotional piece

keep writing--it will help

((((HUGS)))) and love,

karla.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Very sad poem well done.

Reviewed on November 19, 2003
heartwrenching write; keep on writing, walter. that is one reason why I write, so I can heal, too. i know and understand pain all too well, on several levels: emotional, mental, spiritually, even physical. (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
Sad touching write Walter!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 19, 2003
So sad....write away your pain poet and heal. This is so touching...I know its hard to let go.
pax
A


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