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Burning feeling deep inside
by Walter LaVerne Jones → (All Poetry by Walter LaVerne Jones)
  
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Lonely people often get lost in the crowd

Lonely people live inside
Broken pieces in a broken mind

No love in the morning
No pain at night
Only daydreams
To hold me tight

Lonely people filled with pride
Slowly dieing see inside

No words are forming
No morning light
Only moonbeams
Bring a deadly night

Lonely people crying inside
Broken pieces no place to hide

No more tears in the morning
No more train to ride
Only screaming demons
Trapped in my mind

Lonely people silly pride
Trapped feelings deep inside

I walk in shadows
I drink and fight
Straps restrain me
Until morning light

Lonely people trapped inside
Last of feeling finally died

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 Reviews of "Burning feeling deep inside"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
Sadly truthful, Walter. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 17, 2004
Powerful and very sad write Walter!!

I can relate so well to this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on January 16, 2004
A sad write! I agree with Ed - it's true in meany lives.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 16, 2004
Powerfully sad, Walter, and unfortunately true in many lives. Well done.


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