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Serenity

by Jeff Mason — Read all 207 poems by Jeff Mason

Monday, July 12, 2004

Cast upon the soft wet ground,
Colored leaves lay there...
scattered all around,
Like my mixture of thoughts...
about you;

Glistening;
with reflected sunlight...

Listening...
for any sign of breath from you;

for even softest touch,
from the petals of your hand...
upon my brow,
upon my shoulder,
allowing me...
to cry...
to you;

again --

as you had done,
so many times before:

You...
contemplating ...
the rustling leaves --
my ceaseless pain,
that covered me
like drenching rain...

Until with but a word,
whispered in my ear,
and but a touch;
you held me near,
and took away
my deepest fear.

You calmed the gale;
the tempest that assaulted me;

And we set sail,
on oceans vast...

at last...

set free.

Copyright (c) Jeff Mason


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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2004
Set free by a love, unique and extraordinary...
Fantastic write.

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2004
emotively truthful writing with vivid imagery... good stuff! ;)

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
"Cast upon the soft wet ground,
Colored leaves lay there...
scattered all around,
Like my mixture of thoughts..."

I like the way this stanza sets the mood. The initial image is one of being left -- abandoned -- scattered (thoughts, feelings) but it also creates a vision of autum as a transcision into the loneliness of winter. Then you introduce a recollection -- how things used to be -- when we 'were' free, which closes the circle with the melancholy of autum. Excellent progression of thought!

Carmen :-)

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Engaging, expressive verse! You have perfected the craft, Poet.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
OMG this is such beautiful poetry Jeff!!

Really beautiful Sir!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Very Very beautiful Jeff, This one touches the soul, lovely,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
i am overwhelmed by the beauty and honesty of this poem ...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Jeff, I liked this one so much I read it twice for the sheer enjoyment of it! It spoke to me like a gentle breeze in Autumn. Thx,

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Beautiful images in this wonderful poem,Jeff!
It ended with setting a lovely mood...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Nice romantic write with a great ending.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2004
Jeff this is really a lovely poem, it is serene and uplifting.


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