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just when you thought
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Wednesday, August 5, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Just when you thought

Living wasn't bearable

You went way beyond existence

Connected all the stars

Formed constellations

Collected every dust

And threw away a shooting star

A coincidental collapse

Of colors bringing

Every single piece to life

Now look at you

Even more magnificent

The moon envied your radiance

The sun went up

A lil' bit earlier than he did

Just to catch

An itsy bitsy glimpse

The heavens surrendered

To a stunning defeat

Looking at you

A marvel entwined 

Among galaxies even far apart..

 

 


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 Reviews of "just when you thought"
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on August 13, 2015
A lovely light write Appealing

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 11, 2015
Lovely voicing and expression in this one which definitely conveys that lightness of feeling and rapt awe that others have already commented on. Delightful vision and perspective here. xx

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 7, 2015
This is pure poetry.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 7, 2015
Thank you for sharing this beautiful offering, Audrine. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 6, 2015
I loved this poem!
So uplifting and light!
Peace love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on August 6, 2015
Very impressive, a lovely piece work!
Well done, Audrine Max!
Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 5, 2015
A universe of glorious events, beautifully penned! But then, writing about a single person in the process of genesis

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 5, 2015
"itsy bitsy" eh? Love it. Yes indeed, you outshone the stars and the sun and . . . the moon . . . Oh, just about everything within the parameters of this lovely poem.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 5, 2015
Just when I thought you had forgotten me you write with love, charm, and alacrity. OK, maybe not. But it's a nice thought. And a nice poem.

Reviewed on August 5, 2015
Audrine, this is so uplifting! It gives a feeling that one is floating in the universe.
LOVE this!

Sandie


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