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just when you thought
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Wednesday, August 5, 2015 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Just when you thought Living wasn't bearable You went way beyond existence Connected all the stars Formed constellations Collected every dust And threw away a shooting star A coincidental collapse Of colors bringing Every single piece to life Now look at you Even more magnificent The moon envied your radiance The sun went up A lil' bit earlier than he did Just to catch An itsy bitsy glimpse The heavens surrendered To a stunning defeat Looking at you A marvel entwined Among galaxies even far apart..

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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on August 13, 2015

A lovely light write Appealing

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 11, 2015

Lovely voicing and expression in this one which definitely conveys that lightness of feeling and rapt awe that others have already commented on. Delightful vision and perspective here. xx

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 7, 2015

This is pure poetry.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 7, 2015

Thank you for sharing this beautiful offering, Audrine. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on August 6, 2015

I loved this poem!
So uplifting and light!
Peace love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Clarence Prince

Reviewed on August 6, 2015

Very impressive, a lovely piece work!
Well done, Audrine Max!
Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 5, 2015

A universe of glorious events, beautifully penned! But then, writing about a single person in the process of genesis

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on August 5, 2015

"itsy bitsy" eh? Love it. Yes indeed, you outshone the stars and the sun and . . . the moon . . . Oh, just about everything within the parameters of this lovely poem.

Reviewed by E Phillips

Reviewed on August 5, 2015

Just when I thought you had forgotten me you write with love, charm, and alacrity. OK, maybe not. But it's a nice thought. And a nice poem.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 5, 2015

Audrine, this is so uplifting! It gives a feeling that one is floating in the universe.
LOVE this!

Sandie

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