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in the dullness of every ticking moment
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Thursday, December 1, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 one of these days

i'd be dancing the streets
and without a care
spin myself around
with the blowing wind
have the rain be 
my dazzling confetti
tickling my feet
let the sun peak, glimpse 
my on the spot performance
laughter is probably what i hear
the music of my uncoordinated 
one, two step reluctance
and when they give
the spotlight to me
i'd porbably sing 
half of the song
mostly out of tune
but who would mind
when your hand is already in mine
chaos already started 
the leaves rustled
the sun dimmed down
my senses went wild
grasping the very last piece
of what my sanity is
like a psychedelic concerto
of light bulbs shattering
flowers blooming
strings snapping at the fast paced
tempo of the conductor
with a blasted hammer of Thor
the cymbals and the triangle
these are all nonsensical
unappealing, never pleasing
a dismantled organism
a missing piece
echoing within
the old dilapitated hall
despite the atmospheric magniloquence
and climactic events
we hear the violin playing
as our legacy remains to be 
paired with the optimism
of having great music within
we both know
we are tuned in
to each other's refinement
and no matter how
imperceptive and unpronounced
the soundtrack of our lives is
i am dancing with you
in the subtleness of your heartbeat
in the dullness 
of every ticking moment
surrounded by kids 
we have yet to see.
 
©A.max Dec 2, 2022

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Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on December 5, 2022
What a magnificent word artiste you are, Audrine!

The movement, the pace, the symmetry...

Wow... just THANK YOU!
It was a true delight reading it.

Love & Hugs,
Rhonda

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 3, 2022
I am utterly in all of your perception in this ongoing dialogue with life as you see it, eye to eye with me as I spontaneously dance and sing, trying not to be off key as I forget and ad lib lyrics I have forgotten. Unlike you, I find that my sanity is fine and that reverting to my childhood like those coming down the line is a good thing, keeping me in touch with the present and not the past.

Thank you for a wonderful offering to read this morning.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 3, 2022
A kaleidoscope of images, all summarized in the end into a vision of being "surrounded by kids we have yet to see. Lovely thought.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on December 3, 2022
A streaming flow of images that intersect, depart and find further coalescence to become yet more of its potential. Loved "...dancing with you in the subtleness of your heartbeat, in the dullness of every ticking moment surrounded by kids we have yet to see."

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on December 3, 2022
Beautiful and well written.


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