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i've lost
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Thursday, September 5, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 i've lost

a huge part of me
i told mom
and she 
almost hit me
with a stick
she said,
you cannot
lose what you
always have within
 
i am-
not
my experiences,
the stories 
they have of me
their assumptions
and ideas 
of my personality
i am-
not
these accomplishments
the standing i hold
in this precious society
i cannot seek
validation
of what has been
within me
 
she said,
you may have
forgotten
parts of you
but those are
only external
mere ornaments
and jewelries
of what you are
but-
who you 
truly are
is always inside you
 
so i continue
my path
this journey
my soul desired
play the strings
of my frequency
until i-
can once more
finally grasp
the vastness
of who i am
blank slate and
back to basics
back to love
back to my own energy
back to my own
divinity
 
and just let it
ooze out of me
pulsating,
empowering,
awakening
the wholeness
of my Being.

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Reviewed on September 18, 2019
I'm always glad to read you and I appreciate you more than you know, audrine. Write on and be who you are. As I see by your words, you are lovely and searching. That's what we do, hon.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 6, 2019
I didn't know you left, but I'm certainly glad you are back and it is returning.

Interesting introspective.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 6, 2019
I do believe we can lose parts of us for different reasons. It's especially true when we lose a friend or loved one. They were indeed a part of us, and when we lose one we lose a part of ourselves.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 6, 2019
You explore in an interesting way in this poem the conundrum of knowing who we are: It will take a lifetime to know, and even then maybe not. I think you got it right at the end "just let it ooze out of me pulsating, empowering, awakening the wholeness of my Being." What an accomplishment that would be for us all.

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on September 6, 2019
Oh how I wish I could meet you in person. You sound like a luminous beautiful woman who knows truly who she is. Your a pearl in the ocean dear poet, one that doesn't lack lustre when it comes to expressing her soul power. You are becoming one of my favorites, by the hour. Love and hugs xo

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on September 5, 2019
You have proved to everyone else what you can do, what you did do. It's time now to let your within-ness unleash your "back-burner-delayed" talents and share them with the world upfront in a special environment suited for you. I am extremely proud of you and honored to call you a friend. Be well always.

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