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try again
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Monday, June 6, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 i drowned 

in the sea of
outside appearances
forgetting that
the only reality
is Him
only the righteous
only the good
but i
fell asleep
in man's endless state
of good and evil
then i
heard him whisper
deep in my slumber
awake oh sleeper
plant good seeds
and try again
- try again.

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 Reviews of "try again"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 7, 2022
If at first you don't succeed. Try again. The sea contains fish of many colors from which to choose. Each time you will improve your choice until you've reached the right one.

Ron

Reviewed by Tom Leftwich
Reviewed on June 7, 2022
very good words Audrine and great advice thanks for sharing

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 7, 2022
We believe; but do we remember. We sleep but do we ever really awaken. Your poem inspires thoughts.

Reviewed by JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2022
I know Audrine, believe me. Many are called but few chosen. Its light verses dark and we are absolutely extraordinary times like I have never seen. Angelic activity is profoundly shaping and increasing every second. I love how these Angel's are battling wicked forces for God and winning !!!!!!!Let that truly sink in many are called to serve in end times harvest for souls but few are truly chosen. The harvest is great but laborers are few..Are you chosen? He will reveal it in vision and dreams if your truly open in your heart


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