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mental traveller
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Thursday, June 23, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 every night

i do this task
wherein i reimagine
my entire day
to a perfect one
i go backwards
scene to scene
tweaking each
to arrive
at the result 
of my liking
trimming and editing
the acts where 
i have sinned
revising those
to adhere
to what i have
conceptualized within
as they say,
prune the vine
so it will 
only bear fruits
that you like
to which it invokes
a psychological travel
of the spiritual kind
walk by faith
see all 
with the inner eye
deny the evidence
of the senses
it is a lie
it is a lie
continue to dwell
in the right 
state of mind
what has been planted
will soon sprout
to life
prune the vine
clean the mind
dare to be
a mental traveller
collapsing space and time.
 
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 Reviews of "mental traveller"
Reviewed by Poets Soul
Reviewed on June 24, 2022
prune the vine
clean the mind
dare to be
a mental traveller
collapsing space and time.

That was beautiful. Well done mental traveler. Continue to enlighten us with your words and wisdom.

PS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 23, 2022
As your poem suggests, it is very good to go to sleep with a clean slate. But it is better not to have sinned at all. However, for those who have such a mental mechanism as you have shown here and can edit or prune their life in contemplation every evening, your poem shows the way.

Ron

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on June 23, 2022
What would we do without our mental travelling, you are so enriched Audrine, blessings. :)


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