tiny tot bunny (poem) by audrine max on AuthorsDen

tiny tot bunny
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Sunday, July 31, 2022 Rated "G" by the Author.

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each of us have their own dweller sometimes such entity seem bigger than he is and his life depends on the energy we feed him if he overpowers he'll take your sight make you believe in all the lies he'll make you hear words you arent in agreement with feel emotions that are in complete opposite but, this dweller gains his strength to what you feed to him he knows all your doubts and worries the made up tales the whispers of the devil careful not to give in he might overtake your Being and see the world in a dark gloomy place but remember child, you created him so wise up leave your follies he cannot be defeated through anger and fist fight he loves that energy he'll be mightier than he is oh my child, breathe you are his maker let him be something else love him with all the fervor and magnitude of your Spirit he'll shrink in size give him assurance that all is alright infect him with courage bless him your faith he'll be back in your garden not as a pest but a tiny tot bunny kissing your feet isnt this stupendous no dim glasses or mist in your eyes such a beautiful garden this peaceful mind a dweller redeemed an energy cleansed can give you back all the strength you'd given him now that is wise investing remaking oneself always results in changing your world and that is all that matters.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 1, 2022

Much enjoyed your poem, Audrine. Every time I have been hurt it was because I had given my power away to someone else. Wise words.

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com

Reviewed on July 31, 2022

Seems we are with some synergism here, as I'm about to post what I just flogged the keyboard into some acceptance of absurdity notions about myself with "Inside Joke". Liked this romp, as it feels like a stream of consciousness like the genie in the jug: once out, it can't be put back in. That's what these thoughts deserve. Freedom.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

A great rendition of why so many have imaginary friends to help them with loneliness and to make decisions that are usually better than being dragged down by the devil in all of us.

I never had an imaginary friend. Probably because I was a twin and my twin brother was always there with me. So we kept each other out of the devil's work though I was the one instigating everything. And he gladly let me so that he would get in trouble. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy

The dark side always has a strong pull, but never stronger than the light side. That's what "remaking" again and again is all about.

Reviewed by Poets Soul

So true little sister. We create the monsters in our lives. We invent them, feed them and make them stronger than they truly are. If we invent them, then we can destroy them. Darkness to light, that is a power that resides in all of us. Write on.

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