One of the most meaningful and soul touching poems I've ever read. So beautiful, touched me deeply, Audrine.

Nature mimics us so bitterly sweet, your poetry is always so heart felt Audrine,

You wrote a lot of this life, challenges and the simple things that really matter.

Ron

If beauty is one part simplicity and one part elegance, then you have
written a masterpiece. You've come a long way, audrine. Applause!

Simply beautiful!

Voices of Angel's do lead the soul in its everlasting transformation of glorious eternity and once bondage from its former chrysalis come the state into the beauty and ever calling of Creator God Almighty. This was stunning.

You show here how you can transition a flip of themes to suit the need. I like it. The poem's overall tone and what thoughts and emotions are conveyed, the overall mood and the implicitly of themes. Your themes have been most beneficial in my investigative themes, a powerful form of bringing out what needs be. You showcase the analytical way through your poetry, we readers digging out the messages grounded in a wide range of everyday topics you cue, introspective and pensive, and often clandestine of what's to come. This strophe has a hidden metaphor, so take wing on a plane of telepathy wired on the proboscis sucking up sweet nectar just kissing the tongue in a season of chaos magic. The title 'applause of butterflies' alludes to such a colorful visual and a covert silent screening, me "hearing" the clap of their wings, clustered on the tarmac before the big freeze...

"alas- one can hear
the applause of butterflies
ready to pollinate
even more, larger fields"

Duo

Such a clever and sometimes hidden use of nature to expound on the everyday plight of man, the form of existence that is supposed to handle it all. But, as you carefully unfold for us, it is a struggle to survive when the heart and mind refuse to sucome. You are a warrior, one that the butterflies will continually applaud. Keep expressing your soul. It is a vital influence on those of us who read your work.