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up and down
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Tuesday, November 22, 2022 Rated "G" by the Author.

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so he danced up and down up and down through the failures and sorrow he danced up and down up and down every step is a step up higher he laughed only to be pulled back once again to a place he called start so he danced up and down up and down through a myriad of dried flowers and heavy rains up and down up and down even nearing the seeming top he came back to that place once more the beginning, the start and he danced even more up and down up and down it's just how it goes up and down up and down but every fall is a step higher than the last one.

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Reviewed by Mystic Rose

Reviewed on November 22, 2022

lol, when we are determined, we seem to move forward even if it means a few steps back. I love your warm-hearted verse dear Audrine.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on November 22, 2022

And this is life�hopefully gaining positive momentum overall�
Step by step�sometimes retracing our steps�
Nicely put Audrine�

Diana..🍃

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 22, 2022

A poem showing the value of persistence. Nicely done.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on November 22, 2022

A realistic picture of what many experience in life, up and down, only to pick oneself up again. Some sound advice at the end too. Yes, one step higher to the goal.

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