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up and down
by audrine max → (All Poetry by audrine max)
Tuesday, November 22, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 so he danced

up and down
up and down
through the failures
and sorrow
he danced 
up and down
up and down
every step 
is a step up higher
he laughed
only to be pulled back 
once again
to a place he called start
so he danced
up and down
up and down
through a myriad 
of dried flowers
and heavy rains
up and down 
up and down
even nearing the seeming top
he came back
to that place once more
the beginning, the start
and he danced even more
up and down 
up and down
it's just how it goes
up and down
up and down
but every fall
is a step higher 
than the last one. 
 

 


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 Reviews of "up and down"
Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on November 22, 2022
lol, when we are determined, we seem to move forward even if it means a few steps back. I love your warm-hearted verse dear Audrine.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on November 22, 2022
And this is life…hopefully gaining positive momentum overall…
Step by step…sometimes retracing our steps…
Nicely put Audrine…

Diana..🍃

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 22, 2022
A poem showing the value of persistence. Nicely done.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 22, 2022
A realistic picture of what many experience in life, up and down, only to pick oneself up again. Some sound advice at the end too. Yes, one step higher to the goal.


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