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Not A Pretty Poem
by Ronald Dondiego → (All Poetry by Ronald Dondiego)
  
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I was thinking of the beats when I wrote this one.

This is not a pretty poem
it will lack color -
it will lack passion -
there will be voids
I will try to fill
with my words

this poem is rather
like a pool hall whore
her face worn by excess -
by sex, by pain and booze
by pillows stained with sweat
by the rank pull of a bloody
blackened sea of bottomless drinks

I'm not sure if I should
call it a poem - there's no Asphodel
no intricacies of meter - no rhyme
maybe it's as ugly as sin -
maybe it's a lonely portrait
of a face - quite possibly my own
the one i did not want to gloss
over today with a melancholy madrigal
sung by an ancient troubadour
from Spain.

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 Reviews of "Not A Pretty Poem"
Reviewed by Evelyn Norris (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2001
The seamy side of life is ugly. Well portrayed in words. Good. Not afraid to say it.

Reviewed by Robert Kapla (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2001
poem or not a poem.meter or no. It is still a look into our world from an angle only a poet would see. Very nice job. Thanks for reminding me poetry is what we make of it.

Reviewed by Darlene Zagata
Reviewed on July 18, 2001
Stikingly honest and down to earth. I like that!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on July 17, 2001
I really enjoyed this!

Reviewed by Ronald Dondiego
Reviewed on July 17, 2001
I enjoyed the alliteration: "A bloody blackened sea of bottomless drinks." Well done. Cosmo

Reviewed by Cecilia
Reviewed on July 16, 2001
It Shows that not all things in life are beautiful;it has shown the ordanary part of life beautifuly

Reviewed by Rose rose.moss@LineOne.net (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2001
Excellent. Many thanks for your coments on Macbeth. I like Hamlet too !

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on May 28, 2001
Maybe it's art! I like it. JC


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