Dawn has always been an inspiration to me. Its radiance; its colors; its feeling of purity and serenity - awaken my heart to feelings of deep love and devotion. Thanks for reading. Ron
Dawn flows
Through my heart
With cascades
Of softly flowing light
And my soul
Is wiped clean
By the radiance
Of her sparkling eyes
Her light
Drifts through my soul
As her kiss dissolves
Upon my quivering lips
I feel in my being
That we are one -
Locked in her embrace
Swept away into eternity
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Reviewed on February 6, 2002
{-enjoyed}...heartfelt...nice Ronniez
Kaerikoba... / Returning...
akasu yo oku. / dawn breaks on many yearnings.
Asa nago no. / In the morning calm.
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Kaerikoba... / Returning...
akasu yo oku. / dawn breaks on many yearnings.
Asa nago no. / In the morning calm.
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another beautiful piece. I might come back to write if the problem gets resolved. Hope all is well...Thanks for being there..!!
Blessings, JoAnne
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