Treading Softness (poem) by Ronald Dondiego on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Malachy MacFarlane (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

Ron that opening stanza is pure genious (and the rest isn't too far behind!)
"Where hours pass like minutes
And minutes pass like days" <== these lines sealed this piece for me, brilliant! Mal.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Tender and smooth very nice works

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on February 26, 2003

soft...compelling flight into romance...nice. **Mari**

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on February 23, 2003

very very nice

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

I think the world is splendid
With the lightness of your touch
By the softness of your lips
The dawn breaks, the sun
Climbs out of the slumbrous night ....
Romantic write.....I like this part
love
Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

You have such a romantic heart, it easily shows in your works. I wish that I did.

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 10, 2003

Beautiful and ditto to other comments.
~E

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

"Softness" befits this piece, Ron, like an adult lullaby. Very nice.

Erin
:)

Reviewed by TraceyL. Hardie

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

This indeed is a beautiful romantic write... well done!!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Wonderful images.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Beautiful--love the flow, the expression in this...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Ron...this is just superb...keep them coming...BHUWAN

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

By the softness of your lips
The dawn breaks, the sun
Climbs out of the slumbrous night <--- My God Ron you are a true poet. What woman would not long to have such beautiful words written for her. A truly special poem...Ty, Dani

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Well Ron, that is to be sought after ... endless planes of ecstacy. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on February 9, 2003

Lovely, Ron!

Wishing you much happiness,
Gina

Reviewed by David Leigh (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

Excellent! great expression.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on February 8, 2003

This is BEAUTIFUL Ron! May you always tread upon softness!
~Nikki~