very good imagery... like other poets mentioned not really traditional haiku... i would also refrain from personal references like "she" but otherwise well done!
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2003
This is lovely imagery, but haiku is 5-7-5. Even though its not haiku, it is very beautiful and a very good write!! (((HUGS)))
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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2003
You did really well with this! I can't write haiku :|
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
Thank You so much.
Tracey
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Ty, Dani
I thought true haiku was 5-7-5 ?