somewhere in the slums of a columbian city on the tiered hillside of continued existence the old woman lays on a bed of piled cardboard . . . discarded, as is the surplus construction over her head
she fears that no one will come today . . to leave a cup of water or tender a kindness . . . a brush to her hair. . . a bit a cloth bunched for a pillow she fears the day with no word or impish giggle from the barefoot children who peek through the curtain not the rats who run through her scavenger’s maze these she will not bother to notice
she does not shout blame or humiliate the hand that toils on the hill for bits of bread and water like her . . . breathing shadows who straddle the expanse of life and death flowing through trenches of dearth’s feces
this same old woman fears in multiplicity drinking from the unholy water of many cities . . . she will show a toothless smile to the curious child who stands over her bed
jeanne rené 9/03
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