Smothering my legs with shaving foam
in the bath late last night
I was reminded of it again:
I could only have looked
three-quarters of my twenty-four years
as I fought for a seat
in the crowded Fulham pub
that hard-bitten Saturday night
The mutual appreciation society had gathered -
The ageing rock'n'roll singer
awaited eagerly by his grainy-grey
"too-old-to-rock'n'roll-but-too-young-to-die"-ers
And me
And him -
the Stripper, the warm-up
whose baby black-boy body
glistened under spotlights
like Caesar's grapes
Butt-naked he trembled,
nervously self-conscious
and covered only
by the beauty of
his brilliant smile
Through grime and smog
he spotted me,
came over and perched
gingerly on my lap
He smelt soft as myrrh
and edible as vanilla
as he squeezed oozing
pink baby-lotion
into the palm
of my sweating hand;
His eyes implored me:
"Please be nice!"
Egged on by the baying
of an expectant crowd
I did the only thing I could:
I smeared the salve gently
onto his embarrassed face,
blotting out
our indecent exposure
We laughed and knew
we had an understanding:
We said, "No-one needs
to see us like this
and this won't be
what we're known for;
It's OK - we're spared!"
...And all I remember is
that he had the most
beautiful skin,
smooth like bubble bath!
nothing like frolicking in the bubbles ... bursting erotica ...
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
Sure got me curiousity up, dear girl...
about who that black boy stripper was.
Hmmmm...
What a vivid portrait you painted of him!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
WOW!!!… Sounds like you had one heck of a whoopee time spreading the lotion, Kate!!!… Fun write, Poet!!! Thanks for sharing the laughs!!!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
Thanks for being so kind to me..
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
Kate,
WOW take me away shaving calgon Soul sista this is sensual revealing a DREAM AND MEMORY WRAPPED IN SWEET AMBROSIA...AWESOME...
I was drawn in by your canning notice above and i knew i was in for a treat.. A bit nostalgic and ripe with sensual imagary and lathered verses... Yep never growing old and i see neither are you Sista....
HUGS
Love
Peg
Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2004
Lush descriptions...extremely evocative. Very nice!
wow, what an experience...you are just too caring Kate;-)
But aren't you glad the memory is a good one;-)A lesser
person could could have made it a nightmare!Excellent poem!
TRUE STORY. Bella survived an abusive powerbroker father with organized crime ties, a drug-addicted mother and a physically/sexually abusive brother. Shocking & inspirational. When she couldn't cry, she tattooed a crying angel to cry for her.
LOL LOL LOL at Andy's comment!
The joy of living in a body and connecting with another well portrayed here!
gentleman? lady? angel?
wonderful memory!!!
you've got me smiling!!!
pax..........Anita
Best regards,
Leland
about who that black boy stripper was.
Hmmmm...
What a vivid portrait you painted of him!
WOW take me away shaving calgon Soul sista this is sensual revealing a DREAM AND MEMORY WRAPPED IN SWEET AMBROSIA...AWESOME...
I was drawn in by your canning notice above and i knew i was in for a treat.. A bit nostalgic and ripe with sensual imagary and lathered verses... Yep never growing old and i see neither are you Sista....
HUGS
Love
Peg
But aren't you glad the memory is a good one;-)A lesser
person could could have made it a nightmare!Excellent poem!