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Suzanne
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Based on the lyrics of songs by Suzanne Vega... already redrafted since its posting late last night! :)


SUZANNE


I have no substance but the sound
of footsteps ticking,
and the brittle branches of my breath
that crack.

My shadow on the pavement
is the scattering of light.

I have once swallowed
a secret burning thread
that cuts me deep inside
and now I have bled.

Leaving a trail for you to find
I keep you close to lick my wounds,
as you walk invisible
on the side of me that's blind.

I long for the freedom
that is a bullet in full flight,
the piercing point of a needle,
the sharp cutting of a knife.


Hold me tight:
cold and round
I am the marble in your pocket;
the eye that watches you
unblinking.

When you see straight through me
I close myself up like a fan,
concealing all the secrets
of the dark side of the moon.  

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 Reviews of "Suzanne"
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 23, 2005
You're writing some exceptional poetry.
I stand in awe!

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
A beautiful, lyrical piece, Katy dear!

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Not to familier with her songs...but I realy like this poem...the 4th stanza is awesome.

EDL

Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Kate,

A keeper for sure--you've penned a visual, haunting masterpiece that will linger for a while--thank you

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Now this is poetry TY

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
This is excellent. Keepin' it.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
Oh, such a joy to read you, Kate. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 20, 2005
A very different type write for you, Kate - and I agree with Ace on your use of imagery here - wonderful.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
excellent poem, Kate ... i like your evolving style and imagery ...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
AS long that the fan is rotating, one sure does see through it.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
Well I second what Felix said and ditto the others. A very fantastice write.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
"I keep you close to lick my wounds..." says so much about all that is good in relationships. I liked this write temendously Kate thank you for offering it to us.

Felix

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
This is such a profound write, Kate. Some people do close up so no one can ever get to know them, love them or get under their skin. It is a sad situation, but a common one. This is outstanding writing.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
kate, this is so great, i loved it but i hardly recognized it as your style at first

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
Brilliant! No others words apply...

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on March 19, 2005
I know alot of people like Suzanne...closing up like a fan so those who can see through them are left clueless. This is a terrific write. I love Suzanne Vega's music too. Michelle


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