Sensual...and yet...it is deeper than that. To me, it speaks of a love that is tried and true...one that grows deeper with time and trials of life...growing, ever expanding, and all the while storing up golden memories of times and places...that when taken out, and tasted again, bring a sweetness to the soul.
WHew, I need a cigarette and I don't smoke!
What a beauiful imagery filled poem Kate!
This poem is a keeper! YOur love is as sweet as butter!
You write exquisite Kate!
Warmest of Blessings, Love Purple Lady SHEExooox
How wonderfully the final stanza confirms the first and how very sweet each drop of imagery, sensation, exclamation, and blissful testimony flowing flawlessy toward it. Thank you for this taste of poetic holiday honey every bit as sweet as wine.
Your metaphor is sumptious! Like a warm muffin just out of the oven slathered with butter,each bite sublime;-)Your poetry is a delicious gourmet treat, Kate!
"like time that slowly fingers
the face of a clock"
Slow and tender, sensuous and bright,
I love these lines.
And I like all the layers in this poem,
all the aspects that the reader can imagine
as pleasurable and everlasting
between a man a woman.
Oh yes! ;)
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2008
I read this twice...and then thought..and then realized your style with words and the double meanings are beautifully voiced in this poem!
CarolHawks
In this beautiful and lovely description, you present the essence of love between a man and a woman, but not alone as sexual mates, but as soul partners who love learning how it should be when together.
Your poetic volumes are, indeed, unbelievable. - Bill
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Enter the pages of diaspora in quiet introspection. Bathe your thoughts with subtle humor; synchronize your spirit-sense with history-in-heat; fall headlong with eyes wide open into
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
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Cryssa
What a beauiful imagery filled poem Kate!
This poem is a keeper! YOur love is as sweet as butter!
You write exquisite Kate!
Warmest of Blessings, Love Purple Lady SHEExooox
Regis
Aberjhani
"Dusk is the dark
of your earth rising up
to meet my lying down"
& sumptuous imagery ..
"into cells of golden honeycomb
stored in hives of time and place"
sweet ;)
Love it! ;)
This is a 'Keeper' . . . sensational penning!!
Happy Holidays!
Lance
jealous to softened lips...
globe of heat...
cells of golden honeycomb...
sensualy a keeper for sure...
enjoyed, Art Sun...
Sifted breaths interleave
the sheets of us,
moments of self expanding
into cells of golden honeycomb
stored in hives of time and place.
The image of the "cells of golden honeycomb/ stored in hives of time and place." perfectly express the transcendence of the moment. - David
that cleave like butter...
This delicious love feast, Kate, is indeed a keeper.
-gene.
Be always safe,
Karen
the face of a clock"
Slow and tender, sensuous and bright,
I love these lines.
And I like all the layers in this poem,
all the aspects that the reader can imagine
as pleasurable and everlasting
between a man a woman.
Oh yes! ;)
CarolHawks
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D X0X0X0X0X0X0X0X0X0X0
Love and {{{{hugs}}}},
Leland
In this beautiful and lovely description, you present the essence of love between a man and a woman, but not alone as sexual mates, but as soul partners who love learning how it should be when together.
Your poetic volumes are, indeed, unbelievable. - Bill
(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas, Karla.
Edwin
hugs
Fee