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Ocean and me
by Shirley. e Champion → (All Poetry by Shirley. e Champion)
Sunday, August 19, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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About the ocean

When I was twenty seven.
I was pregnant with my daughter.

We swam in the ocean.
Saw beautiful fish swinging.
I walked on the ocean floor.

I got my feet all sand while I was walking on the white sand.

I looked for sea shells.

I heard bells ringing near by.

The ocean water was cold.
When I got out of the water.
The golden sun shone on me.
It kept me warm.
   

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 20, 2018
An experience you haven't forgotten.

Ron

Reviewed on August 19, 2018
I love the image you have presented in this poem. Some tense need to be corrected though in the last paragraph.

The golden sun "shone", not shined.
It "kept" me warm, not keep.

Good luck and keep writing!



Sandie


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