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Just As I Am Leaving, I Notice
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across the room my sister sits barren. her laughter rests in the roof of her mouth. a smile hangs loosely upon her lips, like a crooked painting on a cold wall. sad, the shadows shift back and forth, like finger puppets. she likes to watch them dance. her midnight eyes drifting from sun bleached afternoon into evening's ash. she never complains. she never cries. to spill a tear would be to her like dropping an obscenity into God's clean ear. �

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Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2006

wow! this is really original and powerful

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on April 23, 2006

Oh my, what insight!! Your words are revealing. Excellent write!!!

Peace.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 22, 2006

Wow I really liked this, keep writing and be blessed in the writing
God Bless
Michelle!

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