Promise of Dawn.
You carefully fling two tiny fishing hooks
Bait ecstatic dreams out from closed lids.
You then toss the lasso, tow away the moon
Velvety darkness enters my star studded sky.
Your thoughts stealthily creep into my mind
Ensconced in surreptitious glow and warmth.
Pour true love, sheer joy and contentment
In my heart , every throbbing cell of mine.
I spot molten gold hues at the distant horizon
Your soft smile heralds the promise of dawn.
mitu
where your poem ends: "Dawns promising skies
petals on a pool drifting..."
The two complement each other, and I compliment you.