They should have drown
They thought they drown
As the rage of their passion
Brought them down.
Just in each other's eyes alone
They could not breathe or carry on.
The waves of their souls vibrating power
Flowed over them with its awesome power.
Thrown deep within lust’s grand decent
They screamed out in desires lament.
Loves colors there for them to see
As they were carried out in it's sensual sea.
No time to even catch their breath
As the next wave of passion dragged them back.
Caught up in natures natural flow
As if in the ocean's undertow
In desires deep and salty sea
Their bodies moved to lusts fluidity.
Thrust into a pleasurable title wave
of deep desires their love did rage.
Moment, upon moment in passions sea
to please their hearts to set them free
They should have drown
They thought they drown
As the rage of their passion
Brought them down
Teri this is so good! You take and find the most spectacular artwork to go with your stuff also!!
Hope you are staying warm my little artic pal! Come see me in Florida and we will go walk on the beach and have a few pina coladas or something!! It is supposed to be 80 here on Saturday!! YEAH! You are always welcome!!
Love ya,
Caryn
Reviewed by Terry McDermott (Reader)
Reviewed on March 6, 2002
All I can say is Excellent. I really like that pic.
It reminded me of that song from early 90s..Silent Lucidity..dunno why it came to mind..beautiful poem..and loved all the photos to each poem tonight too!
LOVE this poem!
Hope you are staying warm my little artic pal! Come see me in Florida and we will go walk on the beach and have a few pina coladas or something!! It is supposed to be 80 here on Saturday!! YEAH! You are always welcome!!
Love ya,
Caryn