In the night she leaves her space barefoot alone
There in the green grass of the cemetery she walks
Taunting me she says she is lonely and misses me
I talk to her as if she is still in the flesh but she’s not
I am different now I am all grown up, but she’s sixteen
Long blonde hair flows like many years ago behind her
She seems so sad my heart aches at the time that’s past
What do you say after she’s been in the ground so long?
She says stay here with me, I say please don’t go away
I see the path its concrete it runs through the cemetery
I start to follow it but keep turning looking back to her
I turn and ask what about you she says stay, I say I can’t
She looks at me and starts to walk back to her grave
I yell what about you she says she’s tired and must rest
The world brings me back to life and I feel empty
I miss her but she will visit again when life is silent
When once again I put my head back dreaming of a friend
For my friend Kimberly Ahnette Palmer rest in peace
I remember poems of Kimberly before. Like you I forever see my brother Michael at age 31. I am now older than him, it's strange sometimes. As always very good my friend.
wow this a sad haunting piece I enjoyed reading each line
Beautiful view of thoughts!!
Splendid write!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning star
...the solemnness found in this write of heart...its passage of one missed...and the voice always heard...connecting...becomes as real to us...as it is to you...still.
creative expressive light Theresa...
John
Heartfelt piece
Well composed by your wonderful creative thoughts
Great to be reading your work again
Love & Peace be with you
William
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
sad but I enjoyed reading your poem-I did a poem about a 16 year old but did it quite differently a long time ago-you can find it if you want to read it as
Your sad but heart-worthy meetings have touched my heartstrings, Theresa! Such solemn words and feelings...appreciate your sharing, friend.
Blessings ~~ Micke
(Richard M. Feldman) Ever since I was a young boy, the only thing I wanted to be was a cowboy. I wanted to own and work on a real ranch, with cattle and horses. Especially horses.
While I never became a cowboy, considering everything I have done
Join me as we travel together on the road called "Aging." I will be sharing my personal experiences with you and offer ideas on how we can better navigate the complex byways of our older years. Grief, healing, generations, ancestors, and more.
Peace & Love, Janet xoxoxo
Heartwarming tribute to your friend Theresa.
Continued blessings,
~Gwendolyn
masterfully expressed. "she will visit again when life is silent"-rings so true!
peace & blessings,
carolyn
Regis
Sandie May Angel :o)
Beautiful view of thoughts!!
Splendid write!
Peace Love and Light...and hugesss too...Morning star
creative expressive light Theresa...
John
Well composed by your wonderful creative thoughts
Great to be reading your work again
Love & Peace be with you
William
" I'm only 16 "
Blessings ~~ Micke
Excellent write & photo
Peace and love
Ron