The water slips then drips off the soaked orange tree
As the sparrows take a bath in the watery mud below
The scene here mesmerizes me in the desert’s dawn
Life is alive despite the desert I see off in the distance
Every morning here in the aching light in my yard
Life abounds just below the mountain a walk away
There I can hear the lone coyote’s hungry howl
As the birds bath below my orange tree and frolic
As I water my garden the doves begin to line my fence
A knowing has begun that once done I’ll fill the feeder
A whole new dance begins as they fight for the best seed
As the coyote howls on the mountain above my yard
The Earth has turned again and morning life replays here
In the desert below the mountain of the howling coyote
The bird’s dance and play under the orange tree in my yard
I guess life is good replaying once again in the aching dawn
Theresa
Such a strong focus and setting, you took me there with your vivid detail and all the characters play so well their vital parts. Fine writing.
John
You have recreated and shared the wonderful ambiance of your "space" very effectively via your verses here, Theresa. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
TRUE STORY. Bella survived an abusive powerbroker father with organized crime ties, a drug-addicted mother and a physically/sexually abusive brother. Shocking & inspirational. When she couldn't cry, she tattooed a crying angel to cry for her.
Such a strong focus and setting, you took me there with your vivid detail and all the characters play so well their vital parts. Fine writing.
John
Take care,
William
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Regis
Fee
Elizabeth
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.