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Should We
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Should We

Should we stay home tonight,
Enjoy each others euphony,
talk the night into early dawn,
say so much;
without saying a thing.


Snuggle up by the fireside,
and embrace in each others arms,
wrapped in  fleecy comfort,
loosely 'round our naked forms.


Feel the warmth and revell
in our amatory company.
As the warmth of  fire envelops us,
gently desires begin to flow;
soon our bodies feel the passion.
from depths of nowhere fashioned,


silently fire begins to feed,
tingling in our hearts, our minds,
touches our every need,


We resist temptation to rush,
control the desperate want.
We trace our forms, and every inch,
the fury we disperse
'til electric urges through us pulse
our bodies, resist no more.


E. Bretton
2004 Copyright All Rights Reserved

 


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 Reviews of "Should We"
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
I'd suggest you should!
What could be out there to make up for this?

Reviewed by David Anthony
Reviewed on July 9, 2004
Wow! Very passionate feelings felt here.....I love the verse, "silently fires begin to feed"......beautiful.

Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Absolutely breathtaking imagery, and artwork - terrific write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Sensually passionate and captivating, Elga. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
We should all enjoy this wonderful poem. Well Done, Elga!

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
This is a most beautiful and sensual
poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 30, 2004
Elga,
Very sensual piece. I love these lines in the first verse :

talk the night into early dawn,
say so much;
without saying a thing.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
excellent sensual, romantic poem!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Wonderful romance. Great job.

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Elga,

Who could say no to staying home for a night like that?!?!
This is such a beautiful, soft, serene romantic write with a firey spark of passion! ...Very enjoyable to read, Dear Poet!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
WOW!!!… Elga, You absolutely most definitely should!!! Talking throughout the night without saying anything really does set the stage for a very sensuous, sizzling, beautiful, romantic passionate coupling!!!… Beautiful artwork too!!!… You keep this up, I’ll run out of things to say…lol!!!… I was going to leave it blank, because I was speechless when I first saw and read this incredible piece. I didn’t think you would understand what I meant by doing that, only kidding, I wouldn’t dream of having you guess what I want to say!!!… Anyways I’ve babbled enough on another one of your timeless creations, Poet!!!… Bravo!!! Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
You sure should, but can't see a pic. Maybe there ain't one, albeit georgous write....

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
Elga...this is superbly crafted romantic piece filled with passion...excellent artwork etc...Fletcher B

Reviewed on June 29, 2004
A sweet romantic poem. thanks, Elga.

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2004
only you can place passion in such a beautiful poem~~

marty


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