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Do You Dismiss Me ?
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  Do you Dismiss me ?


Oh Sweetheart,


This from a heart so inspired,
Lost in this timeless space,
 hurting within, longing for,
yearning for you, wanting,
needing your tender love
Hoping for your kind loving words,
are these but elusive
to a desiring mind?


Can you not see the pain you cause?
are you so blind,
Or elect to hear want you want
do you dismiss me?
regardless of this pain within


Can you not comprehend?
that I so long for you.
Need you so desperately.
You’ve stripped my soul naked!
I bare my heart open to you,
what more is it, you want,


Will you strip that too?


© E. Bretton
July 2004 All Rights Reserved

 


 


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 Reviews of "Do You Dismiss Me ?"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Rejection is a most horrid thing, after one has given all. Very clever write...

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 21, 2004
Lol to Jay's comment.
Maybe that's the right attitude.
Excellent write. So true. You hit the point-again.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2004
Glorious..alas it resonates within me..why ..why ..indeed...I'm saving this one!!

vesna.:)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Wow...Elga this is one intense poem...sometimes it seems that love is a powder keg of destructive force, while at the same time a gentle holding of a loves hand...I applaud the way you direct these questions...this is great poetry that cries for an answer...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Emotive and bittersweet poetry can feel the pain

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
emotively strong ... an opulent espression of love unanswered ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Some men are pure b------- s...and don't deserve the attentions and love of a good woman Elga !!
Very painful to read and digest this heartache .

Peter Paton
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Deep and well written write!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
The poet's soul speaks well here, Elga. Wonderful poem and accompanying graphic.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Wow Elga this is so-so touching!!

Love the graphics ...it's awesome!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
An incredibly heart-rending piece of lyrical poetry!
I feel this emotion strongly today, and am glad I dropped by
The Den. Wouldn't have wanted to miss this, Elga.

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
beautiful writing, among your best, elga! wonderul job; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Clap!!!… Clap!!!… Clap!!!… Elga, no one shall ever dismiss you, nor your timeless poetry, Poet!!!… This is an absolutely teeth-clenching, heart-pounding, bone-jarring, breath-taking write!!!… Just incredible!!!… Bravo Poet Elga Bretton!!!… Bravo!!!

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
(((wow, elga)))

the emotions just pour forth from this powerful write--well done, the capture of heartbreak and uncertainty

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
So intensly emotional. A powerful statement of the pain of unrequited love.


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