Oh Sweetheart,
This from a heart so inspired, Lost in this timeless space, hurting within, longing for, yearning for you, wanting, needing your tender love Hoping for your kind loving words, are these but elusive to a desiring mind?
Can you not see the pain you cause? are you so blind, Or elect to hear want you want do you dismiss me? regardless of this pain within
Can you not comprehend? that I so long for you. Need you so desperately. You’ve stripped my soul naked! I bare my heart open to you, what more is it, you want,
Will you strip that too?
© E. Bretton July 2004 All Rights Reserved |
Maybe that's the right attitude.
Excellent write. So true. You hit the point-again.
vesna.:)
Very painful to read and digest this heartache .
Peter Paton
Home Page: http://www.authorsden.com/peterpaton
Love the graphics ...it's awesome!!
Love Tinka
I feel this emotion strongly today, and am glad I dropped by
The Den. Wouldn't have wanted to miss this, Elga.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
the emotions just pour forth from this powerful write--well done, the capture of heartbreak and uncertainty
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(