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Mind is but a Floating Orb !
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Mind is but a Floating Orb !

Gut-wrench; but is it?
Feelings knotted inside of me,
fallen by the wayside,
I see myself lying in a heap.
Frantic questions within my mind,
could it be me that I see?
or a sad reflection of how
wasted I really feel.
Mind a whirlpool of confused
and fractured thoughts,
casting shadows upon my being.
I walk in darkened alleys,
traversing within myself,
reaching out to touch reality
a mere illusion deceiving me.
Grasping at fleeting glimpses,
of streaky flickers of eluding light.
Mind is but a floating orb !
wandering in forgotten realms,
quite easy to lose myself,
in a foreign plane:

Another Time!

� E. Bretton
16 July 2004 - All Rights Reserved

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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Me too! ;)

JC xoxoxo

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Elga,
Very well done. I love these lines :

Mind a whirlpool of confused
and fractured thoughts,
casting shadows upon my being

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Always a joy to read your work.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Elga, another winner...a powerful write filled with excellent thoughts...haunting, emotion filled verses...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

the sphere of your perspective is engrossing!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Love the mystical feeling of this write.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Sounds like a dream I Had some time ago. A wellspring of thoughts that stimulate the imagination

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Yes I can relate to this. Haunting
and profound.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Elga, this is elegant and striking poetry, along with the fabulous artwork is beyond the floating orb!!!� It�s out of this world!!!� I guess you can tell, I really liked this piece???!!!� Outstanding creation, Poet!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Auch we are on the same page today my dear friend!!

Very well composed!!

Warm Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

(((elga)))

a powerful, beautiful, emotional write--so wonderously composed, your thought provoking piece--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

A very complex and intriguing poem that asks searching questions of the reader .

Very clever and professional Elga

Hugz and Love

Peter Paton

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