Mood Enigma
Oh babbling fountain full of love Spilling over with sheer contentment Great passion and emotional power, Guide my spiritual energy, Keep it channeled, and keep it strong.
Could I lose my focus now? Down pathways new and strange, For you’re not there to guide me Your failure to console me In times when it’s needed most.
Do you fear you’d make me bitter? Do you fear that I’ll resent you?
Answer Broken Sparrow, Don’t hide in the recesses of darkness Console now, Mood Enigma, And let her see the light of love and life Show her the path to illumination.
Is loneliness the feeling that you have? Are your emotions that of a lost and angry child Left to roam solitary in this darkness Does this scare and frighten you ? Those fears are but inside your own mind
Do you fear you’d make me bitter? Do you fear that I’ll resent you?
Whose value systems have lost integrity? Whose subjectivity reigns supreme? Do we both flounder in the darkness For purpose and stability Broken Sparrow is it you, for it’s not Mood Enigma
Are your wings too far clipped? Are your fears too ingrained? Is the truth that the icon in the mist Is truly more than just a pale reflection Of both our own desires.
Do you fear you’d make me bitter? Do you fear that I’ll resent you?

© E. Bretton 2004 – All Rights Reserved |
this is a most beautiful, thought provoking piece--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
My previous review???
Go check it ourt on the first "Mood enigma" okay!!
Love Tinka
A beautifully crafted poem, exquisite art to match!
A literary game of Chess......Lol
Who holds the Queen....Hee Hee
Peter Paton
Do you fear that I’ll resent you?
Very strong and poinant lines. Thanks Elga for posting this marvelous offering.
Wonderful poetry Elga!
Sandie May Angel