I lie here, pensive, very deep in thought, in a trance like state, enveloping me, clutching me, drawing me deeper, and I am not afraid, I feel a sense of total comfort within, I let myself go, let myself float, euphoric sensations that I feel within. Knowing that I can travel this astral realm, feel what some others may not feel, see what others may not see. go wherever I wish, enjoy the feeling if only temporary. My heart beating a gentle thud, slow and rhythmic trance like. Eyes, not focused, hands not mine, body so weightless, heart beat still constant, ascending towards my throat. Sensation, an absolute calmness, serene, peacefulness; exudes in in this place, alone in quietude, no hurt, no struggle no pain. Only bird songs outside, then again a silence, once again within my soul, oh joy ! what peace.
Serenity !
© E. Bretton July 2004
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The hourglass - watching the seconds and minutes pass by.....
This is outstanding.
There is serenity in that.
a superbly crafted piece--so serene and masterfully penned--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
one to be carried into the whirlpool of experience outlined in
these verses.
Sounds like you have reached the heavenly Valhalla shores of peace , serenity and safety .
Beautiful feelings...
Peter Paton
Excellent work..well done!!! I'm saving this one!!
TY!
Vesna :)
Allen
Like the hourglass shape of your write...it telss a story of its own!!
No Picture?
Love Tinka
Love & Light, JC xoxoxo
mind of astral projection. It is
depicted in all its reality and
delivers with a full range of senses
that carries the Ethereal Mind into
flight!
D a n a M a t t h e w s
A poem that is superbly written with great style. Love this.
Sandie May Angel
P.S. It reminds me of a couple of my poems with the same style. Thank you for sharing! ~ SA~