Pain Within ... (poem) by ~Indigo~ Elga on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 31, 2004

You express your deep emotions and you've shown
us the power of poetry. Brilliant work!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

(((elga)))

pain within and pain without--powerful, heartfelt, emotional write that is deeply rooted in agony--very well written, dear (((friend)))

i hope this is fictional, (((HUGS))), anyway :)

love, karla. :( *i felt this one*

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

A very powerful poem. thanks elga

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

Very emotive piece Elga!!

Warm Drukkies skattie...!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 30, 2004

You could still to Pain filled greeting cards.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

"Pain Within..." sings its painful lines... A poem that drops emotions, and enriches the pages of Poetry.

It is a convention that the Panacea for all wounded hearts is LOVE.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Elga...this is a very sad poem...when love causes one to betray another loves trust...the world seems to be a very cold place...it is great to see the actual pain that couples, once separated from one another actually feel and go through, in your poetry. Although it is clear that internal pain is quite possibly the most hard to recover from...with time the healing works its magic ever so caringly...You poem is an explosive write of a pain that I am sure all of us at one time or another have come face to face with...this is some of the finest, albeit sad poetry I have ever read...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Elga, this soul-gripping heartwrenching write is absolute pure poetry at its finest. Unfortunately it is also a very painful write. Keep that brilliant smile beaming and that magic quill churning out these masterpieces. Thank you for sharing your remarkable talents and timeless artwork, Poet. You know how to reach me, and I�ll act the fool to keep you laughing your buns off my friend.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

your pain is deep, your poetry superb ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

I feel torn to shreds just reading it Elga! An excruciating
poem of heartache I can relate to. Beautifully written!
Love the art too!((((hugs)))))

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Painful write

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 29, 2004

Occh..This one really hurts Elga
A torturous and agonizing rendition

Peter Paton