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Forever Autumn REPOST
by ~Indigo~ Elga → (All Poetry by ~Indigo~ Elga)
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~~~For those who have read this before and commented on it I thank you :-)~~~

Warm hugs and love to all
Elga ;)

 

 

 

Forever Autumn

Forever Autumn in this place,
That feels the pain within these walls,
Who cries for freedom and the love?
Forever autumn!

The walls that hold this soul within.
The cries and fears of wanting out,
The rays of sunlight sometimes glimmers
Brings nuances, of eternal summers.

Orange hues of coloured walls,
Painted pictures down the halls,
Haunting shadows, which laid forgotten
Now light the corners of this room.

Draw the curtains, close the door,
Keep her helpless within these walls,
Cry the tears of neglected moments,
Dwell on happiness, which was before.

Confused with love and brutal passion,
She walks the winding stairway spiral,
Stopping often to view the scenes,
Tempting now to recapture seasons.

Still on and on she floated,
Before the window of this room,
Far too risky to take the step,
To open up, and let sunshine in.

Could it be the comfort zone?
Could it be she’s still alone?

Sitting huddled by the fire –
Autumn with her hint of coolness,
Tempts her now with her desire
Urges her closer, to hues of autumn.

Seasons floated all the same,
Missing spring and summer rain
Outside then the winter lay,
But that too soon, went away.

Autumn paints these walls,
The room wherein her comfort lies,
For now this is where she’ll stay
Keeping vigil, as the seasons fly.

E. Bretton

Copyright Material 2004

 

 


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 Reviews of "Forever Autumn REPOST"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Stunning poetry, love the blending of the picture and the poem..

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Outstanding composition, Elga. Seems like everyone has touched on the emotional factors relating to this magnificent timeless masterpiece, Poet. Bravo. May the gentle winds always soothe your tender soul.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2004
Elga...absolutely beautiful poetry...very beautiful...Fletcher B

Reviewed on August 1, 2004
Wonderful write Poetess Elga! Enjoyed this piece of well-crafted poem very much!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 1, 2004
A true beauty.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 1, 2004
exceptionally beautiful poetry ...

Reviewed on July 31, 2004
(((elga)))

such a burst of bright color and beauty on this hot afternoon in texas--i relish the coming season (it can't get here soon enough)--refreshing as a cool breeze! thank you--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
I love this, Elga! It has such depth, warmth and a beauty, as well as a rich intrigue and slight "chill" factor as your character mysteriously wends her way through historic hallways. It seems to me both forward-looking and nostalgic. A wonderfully woven piece, thank you. Kate x

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
Both poem and art are superb Elga! Autumn is my
favorite season! I look forward to it;-)
Very beautifully crafted poetry !

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
Awesome work Elga!!

Your ghrafics are soooooo outstanding!!

PRAGTIG JONG!!!!!!

Vertel my die geheim om dit te doen oraait:))))!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
ahhhh..very nice and contemplative Elga

Peter Paton

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
Spring and Authmn my two favorite seasons. Well composed poem. A delight

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
This is a beautifully written poem. I have to say that I am partial to autumn and all that it brings and you have done an outstanding job putting this together. Good luck to you.

M.Rose

Reviewed on July 31, 2004
Well crafted and extremely colourful. Thanks Elga for this beautiful soul-waring poem.


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