Tears I've cried...
Tears I’ve cried on lonely nights, Thoughts drift across the sea, Do you ever stop to ponder, And muse how I might be?
Did I even touch your heart? You know you've captured mine, Have I a place inside your soul, Like you reside in mine?
It’s unfair to ask me to forget, This burning passion I feel for you, Could it be unrequited love? Or emotions you won’t let through.
Why would you want to sever ties, That bind across the raging sea, Is it something you conceal within, Or do you fear connectivity?
© E. Bretton August 2004
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Have asked myself exactly all those questions before. And also did not find the answer.
Superb write.
An extremely powerful and extremely well penned poem, Elga.
Allen
a most moving poem, Elga ... no doubt you're connecting ...
Superbly written love forlorn...
i know its from the heart.......it bleeds across the page....
but mechanically..........its so perfect
but enough of technical talk
I know its hard.......but believe me.......things change! All the time......things change.........
for the positive!!
be well and be strong!
pax A
You got the top romance spot, for sure..
do you touch my heart?? absolutely--you don't have to worry about that. your words are a balm to my soul. this is magnificent in meter, rhyme and presentation.
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
i only hope i've touched you in a small way
Heart touching Read girl!!
Love Tinka
Touches the soul
Peter