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Tears I've Cried ...
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 Tears I've cried...

Tears I’ve cried on lonely nights,
Thoughts drift across the sea,
Do you ever stop to ponder,
And muse how I might be?


Did I even touch your heart?
You know you've captured mine,
Have I a place inside your soul,
Like you reside in mine?


It’s unfair to ask me to forget,
This burning passion I feel for you,
Could it be unrequited love?
Or emotions you won’t let through.


Why would you want to sever ties,
That bind across the raging sea,
Is it something you conceal within,
Or do you fear connectivity?


© E. Bretton
August 2004

 

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2004
I couldn't have said it differently or better!
Have asked myself exactly all those questions before. And also did not find the answer.
Superb write.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
This is exquisite, Elga, and top-drawer in all respects - not least in the beautiful presentation. I am sure it would have the most exotic perfume with it, too, if only we could attach the appropriate sensor to our PCs! Just beautiful and takes some beating. Sure do hope that it has its full effect and impacts and melts the object of its desire...Perfection! Thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
well done.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Great one

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Alas, far too many souls in the world 'fear connectivity.'

An extremely powerful and extremely well penned poem, Elga.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Excellent write Elga, your emotions here are excellently portrayed.
Allen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Elga...a very touching write...full of lots of questions...great poetry...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
i have no doubt you've touched the heart of your love ... connecting is a process that requires the essence of understanding ... and in this poem you are truely attempting to understand the criteria of your affection ...

a most moving poem, Elga ... no doubt you're connecting ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
The heartache in this one is palpable,Elga!
Superbly written love forlorn...

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Connections are good, as long as each person doesn't want to own the other?

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
this was written so beautifully.........
i know its from the heart.......it bleeds across the page....
but mechanically..........its so perfect

but enough of technical talk

I know its hard.......but believe me.......things change! All the time......things change.........
for the positive!!

be well and be strong!
pax A

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
So sad and heart rending. A beautiful write, Elga.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Stunning, I can so relate. Spec with first stanza. Just love your unique way. Yopu must have men queueing for you, over there.

You got the top romance spot, for sure..

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
I agree with all of the reviewers, this is a remarkable poem

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Elga, this is an exceptionally well-written heartfelt composition, my friend. Very powerful poetry, at its finest Poet. Take a bow, for you’ve earned it! I enjoy reading your work!

Reviewed by ZaKiYa Online
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Nice i enjoyed it --

Reviewed on August 3, 2004
(((elga)))

do you touch my heart?? absolutely--you don't have to worry about that. your words are a balm to my soul. this is magnificent in meter, rhyme and presentation.

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

i only hope i've touched you in a small way

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Wow Elga!!!

Heart touching Read girl!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Very beautiful and exquisite Elga
Touches the soul

Peter


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