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Carefree Chaos...
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~~~OK,it's a little different I know, but we all have our moments :) ~~~

Even now I am still feeling apprehensive about posting it!!














 
 Carefree Chaos..

Behind our night-caped minds,
that we allowed happen.
We tweak hidden recesses,
of our souls' forgotten pleasures.
Scenes skitter into slideshows,
reminding us of youth past.
Exhilarating ecstasy, of love and freedom,
when permanence mystified our minds.
Psychedelic images now begin creating visions -
where carefree chaos used to reign,
now eager to unveil the night which descended,
to robe with resplendent liquid sunshine,
allowing life’s winsomeness,

 to envelop us once again!

 

© Elga Bretton
All rights reserved - March 2004


 

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 Reviews of "Carefree Chaos..."
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 10, 2004
My dearest Elga,
You know sometimes the stuff you are most hesitant to present turns out to be your best stuff. Why haven't I seen this one huh? lol
I think it is one of the most beautiful of your poems and I loved it. What a magnificent descriptive verse this is. Gush gush gush etcetera
Luv Chanti
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 5, 2004
superb poetic dexterity ...
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
Reviewed on August 5, 2004
Very interestng write. As usual you penned another wonderful poem. Thanks Elga.
Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Softly written and elegant. A joy to read. Franz
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Elga...very knowledgable write...great poetry...Fletcher B
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Elga
I enjoyed this piece much
wonderful write

Willam
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Carefree Chaos can be good for one's soul - once in awhile!

You had no need to be apprehensive about posting this poem, Elga.
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Elga...I agree with Eileen below...I have no idea why you were apprehensive...this is truly wonderful...it is soft, sensuous and a joy to read.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
A delightfully sensuous poem Elga! Why on earth
would you feel apprehensive? This is very well done!
The art as always wonderful!;-)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Delightful piece Elga!!

Always a joy to read your "creations" Sis!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
A very well-written sensual and beautiful write, Elga. You continue to blaze across the sky with your remarkable explorations that pour freely from your golden quill, my friend. Thank you for sharing them with all of us. Outstanding creation, Poet.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Wonderful write
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Glad you shared this. Wonderful descriptive write!
Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
very nice
Reviewed by R Jay Slais (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Way to grow Elga, keep trying new things,
this is really great, an enjoyable read!

:)
Firestarter
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Delightful to experience your verses, Elga. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
Yes Elga a highly original and carefree pen , which demonstrates that flexibility and adaptibility , are valuable tools in a writer's hand .

Peter
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2004
I really like it, different but a pleasure to read.
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