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Feel the hurt
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 Feel the hurt


Black caped velvet nights
through recesses it tiptoes,
stealing stealthily through your mind,
shadowed footsteps it chose.


Furtive and gliding silently,
slow motion and unobserved,
reaching into the depths,
where it knows you'll feel the hurt.


Running fingers of emotion,
touching a soft and gentle heart,
eager to envelop it,
in darkness from the start.


Sparing no forgotten tricks,
tantalising your very soul,
moving in and out of shadows,
It's got your full control !


Copyright Elga B
August 11, 2004 - All Rights Reserved

 

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 Reviews of "Feel the hurt"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Deep and very powerful write, sure know that feeling of the hurting, like a private hell....


Some poem Elga...
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
It's painful and powerfully touching.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Black caped velvet nights, moving in and out of the shadows - powerful imagery, and a most powerful poem, Elga.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Painful read...that touched the heart Elga!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
I do love the way you work with words. Great write.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Elga, this is an exceptionally powerful emotive piece of timeless poetry! It seems far too often nasty creatures of the night lurk deep within the shadows, and pounce unmercifully on their unsuspecting prey without any warning, nor with any regards to the unnecessary damage they cause! May the gentle winds of the Creator’s grace guard and protect you and yours throughout your journey through time and space. Outstanding composition, my friend! Take care and be well.
Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Elga...very well written...your ryhme meter is on fire...you go girl!...Fletcher B
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
penned with emotive clarity ...
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
This is painful and so well written. Elga
Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
The shadows of our minds are very powerful, you cannot control it. Well-expressed.

Sandie May Angel
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Boy this is the truth. Some of my dreams go forever with no faces but shadows. I often wondered what it was all about until this last year and that's a new story. beautiful poetry!
susan
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
Beautiful lines! Especially, the opening.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on August 11, 2004
(((elga)))

ouch. felt this one deep--powerful, vividly expressed emotions and imagery--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
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