Tranquil serene and pacified mind rugged landscapes I will leave behind enter the fusion of a passion union together as one, the electric surge the intensity that flows between the souls the warmth the tenderness that takes control delight in the sense of embracing arms tender hands caress the sensory cortex lips brush close the nape and cheek tantilisingly hover over fervent lips gazing lovingly into liquid pools losing yourself within their depths sublime exalted euphoria rising to soaring heights of exhilaration infusion of bodies mingled as one growing above the celestial realm weightless in heavenly abondonment bursting forward in a galaxy of light surrender willingly to the milky way.
(c) Elga B August 2004 - All Rights Reserved
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Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Elga...electrifying write...romantic to the last spark...sensual to the last charged nuron...great poem...Fletcher B
i luv the celestial imagery and supernal inferences in this very well written romantic poem ...
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Hello Elga, I have been trying to make my way back to your remarkable den, and I am so glad I have my friend. This piece is just stunning from the artwork to well-used collection of words woven in a seamless flow all the way through to the Milky Way! Absolutely brilliant composition, Poet! Bravo! Take care my friend.
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growing above the celestial realm
great lines of passion
journey full of passion! Superb Elga!
I like the line
'surrender willingly to the milky way'
Sensuous, indeed, Elga!
A gem from your pen..
Peter
This is going to let a few men sweat.......lol!!
Love Tinka
bursting forward in a galaxy of light
surrender willingly to the milky way.
..exceptional lines indeed..
grand write..ty Elga...:)
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