As I dance This dance tonight waltz in the haunting moonlight captured in essence dancing to ghostly songs in my heart beating a rhythm pulsing the veins capturing the moment within this fragile contentment destiny's embrace as I dance in your arms a lover's dance of pallid complexions sad reflections enduring the songs that call to me taking my heart to planes afar where memories whisper a sad melody entrancing my mind gentle the beat that plays from beyond distant to me
As I dance This dance tonight.
E.Bretton Copyright Material 2004
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Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Elga...as does your poetry dance a whirling waltz of wonderful words and imagery...Fletcher B
Elga, this magnificent heartfelt composition ensures you an audience with the Grand Masters of the old! It has pure emotion, pouring off the page, Poet. Simply an incredible creation my friend. Thank you for sharing your timeless work. Be well and let it flow! Bravo!
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o, my--i love your lines in this one, beautifully written and illustrated--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
of pallid complexions"
i really like this line as well as the entire poem ...
a celestial dance of desire!
Love Tinka
to planes afar
where memories
whisper a sad melody
entrancing my mind
exceptional lines..lovely!
*V*
Beautifully composed and very romantic
Peter