self control metamorphosed into broken being not enough?
back for more ! keep knocking same old door
unhandled scenes too similar sinking, silently slow, surrender give way...
thoughts unleased pain beating deep beneath
memories should serve reminder... of tumultuous past !
Copyright Elga B. August 2004 - All rights reserved
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Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
Elga, it’s a question many ask, yet, as human beings we must always strive for a better tomorrow! There isn’t anything one should ever feel like a fool, clown or guilty about in the hopes of achieving the ultimate satisfaction, which is sharing love with another human being! Notice how I said, “Human Being!” That’s the difference between humans and animals, humans yearn for something better, animals however, just don’t give a darn! And, that’s putting it mildly! Timeless creation! Take care my friend.
Powerful piece, Elga, and despite painful memories that should stop us, we all seem to go back for more of many things in life, when we should know better. Part of our human nature me thinks.
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Allen
reflective, thought provoking, emotional piece--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
this poem is well written
to go through this!Superb poem Elga,painfully so!;-)
The fire of infidelity could be a killer...Methinks!!
Love Tinka
your feelings in a way to escape the pain.
I believe anyway. I hope so! Great expression!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel
The greatest love of all ...is love for God...who will surely give us our rightful and just desserts...
Peter
keep knocking
same old door
Powerful piece, Elga, and despite painful memories that should stop us, we all seem to go back for more of many things in life, when we should know better. Part of our human nature me thinks.