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What where you thinking ? ~*~
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~*~ Wondering if it will be understood !~*~


 

















 

  What were you thinking ?


 A fool
a clown
what where you thinking ?



eyes wide shut ...
unblinking!


self control
metamorphosed
into broken being
not enough?


back for more !
keep knocking
same old door


unhandled
scenes too similar
sinking, silently
slow, surrender
give way...


thoughts unleased
pain beating
deep beneath


memories should serve
reminder...
of tumultuous
past !


 

Copyright Elga B.
August 2004 - All rights reserved


 


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 Reviews of "What where you thinking ? ~*~"
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
Elga, it’s a question many ask, yet, as human beings we must always strive for a better tomorrow! There isn’t anything one should ever feel like a fool, clown or guilty about in the hopes of achieving the ultimate satisfaction, which is sharing love with another human being! Notice how I said, “Human Being!” That’s the difference between humans and animals, humans yearn for something better, animals however, just don’t give a darn! And, that’s putting it mildly! Timeless creation! Take care my friend.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Excellent write Elga, to which understanding flows fee in these wonderful lines, if only we could learn from them.
Allen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Fantastic images of thought. Great write.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Elga...a very powerful piece of poetry...well done...Fletcher B

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
(((elga)))

reflective, thought provoking, emotional piece--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
I understand perfectly.
this poem is well written

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Great introspective creation, Elga. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
What was I thinking... how many times has that question been asked. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Makes me wonder how often we allow ourselves
to go through this!Superb poem Elga,painfully so!;-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Very insightful!!

The fire of infidelity could be a killer...Methinks!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Oh, I relate. Solid write, Elga.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
This is painful and yet you've captured
your feelings in a way to escape the pain.
I believe anyway. I hope so! Great expression!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
I know who to send this one to. Thanks

Reviewed on August 15, 2004
This one is sad. Hope it's not about yourself.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
A sad and reflective write Elga...
The greatest love of all ...is love for God...who will surely give us our rightful and just desserts...
Peter

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
back for more !
keep knocking
same old door

Powerful piece, Elga, and despite painful memories that should stop us, we all seem to go back for more of many things in life, when we should know better. Part of our human nature me thinks.


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